Hey guys, I've been reading twilight fanfiction for the past 3 years and my favorite types are always the High School genre AU/AH (doesnt matter). But it's always hard for me to find good ones because there's so many bad cliches, and I'm really picky about the fics I read. I wanna know if these pet peeves of mine also bothered you when you read the High School types, because this is a rant that's been coming for a long time for me ow :D
1. Bella and Edward (especially Edward) are sex fanatics-- I don't know how many stories I've read where the entire plot is centered around sex. Yes, I get that they're in high school and teenagers have sex, but some of these fics take it to a whole new level. I love smut as much as the next girl, but when I'm reading 5+ chapters of straight smut which contributed little to the plot overall, I find myself scrolling through them. Also, I hate (hate hate hate) in fics how it seemed like all people are concerned about is who's doing whom. Like, that's all Alice and Rose would talk about and do with their partners. If there's a scene that mentions them, THEY ARE PROBABLY HAVING SEX IN THE ROOM UPSTAIRS WITH JASPER/EMMETT. It's very one-dimensional for me. For me, less is sometimes more ;)
2. Edward as a man-whore--I'm sure a lot of you are familiar with this. Edward's a slut who shagged the entire school and has his own little harem following him. He's cocky, rude, BUT HE TOTALLY WANTS THE NEW GIRL (aka. Bella). I don't know about you, but this is very unrealistic for me and I get bored of it real quick because it usually leads to him wanting to have sex with Bella and ta-da! We have cliche number 1 now!
3. This one is probably the most irksome one and it's a characterization problem. A lot of the times I feel like the characters don't sound like high school kids at all. Unless you writting canon vamp-ward, then the line "You are my life now." should not even make an appearance in the fic at all. What sort of a 17 year old human boy would say that?! There's other ways to express how important someone is in your life without having to use these cheesy/cringed worthy lines (not to mentioned how awkward it sounds). Also I hate it when Edward and Bella first meet and they INSTANTLY FALL IN LOVE. Some initial attraction I understand, but if it's monologue after monologue about how sexy/hot Edward/Bella is and how they day dream about each other and have no life outside of how hot the other person is, I get mad bored. I'll rather see it slowly developed over time than have them be in love by the end of the week. Also, I hate it when Edward is a totally asshole to Bella, and she is still thinking about how hot he is everytime she sees him.
But of course there are fanastics high school fics too. I recently finished Elemental and even though it's about Witches, there's still an element of highschool since everyone is in their teens. What I love about this fic is that Edward is normal, aka realistic, protrayal of an adolescent boy. He's arrogant, sometimes rude and implusive, and is insecure at times while still managing to be sweet and compassionate (of course, it takes time for that side to come out, as do many teen boys in real life). AND NOT A SEX GOD. Also, I like the gradual steps they take to end up together. None of the "Hey I just met you and I think I love you and want to shag you." No. Best of all, when he's a being a douche to Bella, she doesn't take it lying down and despite her initial attraction to Edward, knows that he's being an asshole and fights back. Gotta love a girl with some spunk.
Okay having said that, I totally recommend Elemental if you're sick of a lot of high school cliches (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5241793/1/Elemental), and tell me what your least favorite cliches for high school fics are! And if you know any decent HS fics that wouldn't make me wanna pull my hair out of frustration :D
Have a good day!